Judge’s Critique

Contest:

Fall 2004

Title:

Author(s):

Mike Hyden

Result:

Judge’s Score Sheet

Category

Score

Notes

Emotional Impact

1   2   3   4   5

Hook

1   2   3   4   5

Originality

1   2   3   4   5

Appeal

1   2   3   4   5

Focus

1   2   3   4   5

Phrasing/Cadence

1   2   3   4   5

Form

1   2   3   4   5

TOTAL SCORE

31

Judges Comments

Great idea! Well-developed and focused. The last verse (ebony & ivory) has been done! I know you "have it in you" to finish stronger! This song has real potential! Great rhymes and images. Good Job!