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Contest: |
Fall 2004 |
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Title: |
GREAT DISTRACTION |
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Author(s): |
DORI ANN COBB |
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Result: |
3rd Place |
Judge’s Score Sheet |
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Category |
Score |
Notes |
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Emotional Impact |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Hook |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Originality |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Appeal |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Focus |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Phrasing/Cadence |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Form |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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TOTAL SCORE |
24 |
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Judges Comments |
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Good idea here! I think that with a little more development, it could be a real hit! I'd like to see you "set-up" the hook with a rhyming line so that the chorus ends with "Great Distraction." You also may need a great bridge to add a final touch and another perspective. Good job! |
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