Judge’s Critique

 

Contest:

Summer 2004

 

Title:

LOW RENT MAMMA

 

Author(s):

Kim Ilene McDaniel, Sean Michael O'Keefe

 

Result:

3rd Place  

 

Judge’s Score Sheet

Category

Score

Notes

Emotional Impact

1   2     4   5

 

Hook

1   2   3   4   5

 

Originality

1   2     4   5

 

Appeal

1   2   3   4   5

 

Focus

1   2   3   4   5

 

Phrasing/Cadence

1   2     4   5

 

Form

1   2     4   5

 

TOTAL SCORE

20

 

 

Judges Comments

A well written lyric. Wasn't strong on an emotional level, but catchy. I can almost hear the song. 

 

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