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Contest: |
Spring 2005 |
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Title: |
Where Are My Car Keys? |
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Author's): |
Mike Hyden |
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Result: |
2nd Place |
Judge’s Score Sheet |
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Category |
Score |
Notes |
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Emotional Impact |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Hook |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Originality |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Appeal |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Focus |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Phrasing/Cadence |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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Form |
1 2 3 4 5 |
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TOTAL SCORE |
26 |
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Judges Comments |
| Cute song! Great rhyme scheme which you maintained throughout. I think the bride could be stronger and possibly shorter. The bridge seemed a little anti-climatic after all the adventures in the verses. :-). Good job! You are definitely a skilled songwriter! |
see the Lyric Judging Criteria