1nd PLACE DSA 2006
SPRING LYRIC CONTEST

Judges Comments
 

With thousands of Baby Boomers turning 60 every day since January 2006, this evocative song will become more and more relevant.  With conversational tones, everyday words, and a simple story, the writer takes us to a place that no longer exists except in memory, but we can see the sign, smell the fish frying, and hear the music across the water.  Excellent story song.

The Dancing Fish Café

 

She was the first of the Boomers born to parents of the war

Too young for failin’ memory, but it’s going more and more.

We’re losin’ to the bad days, but today she’s at her best.

She’s done her hair and makeup and put on a cocktail dress.

Tonight she want to ride our boat on out to River Town

And she lightly lifts her hem and sort of sashays down.

She says, “We’ll have some Margaritas and the sea food buffet

And cut a rug till sunup at The Dancing Fish Café.

 

Chorus:

No one’s been to The Dancing Fish Café

Since the day they backed up the lake.

It’s still out there in old River Town

Underwater, ‘bout sixty feet down –

A fish danced on a big neon sign

Standing upright and hooked on a line

The smell of fried cornmeal thick in the air..

Somehow I’m going to take her back there.

 

The stillness of the lake reflects the fullness of the moon,

So real it seems as if we’ll be collidin’ with it soon.

She’s smilin’ as the warm wind strokes her salt and pepper hair.

We pass the railroad trestle, and we both know we are near.

With the engine off and music on, and the big moon up above

I thank the Lord for one more day with the woman that I love.

And I’m not sure she understands, but I know she doesn’t care

‘Cause we just hold each other tight and dance together there.

 

Chorus, repeat chorus

 

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