HONORABLE MENTION  DSA 2007
FALL LYRIC CONTEST

Judges Comments
 

Black and White

(Mike Hyden)

"The idea here is a good one if you can do it without sounding preachy. I would leave out the verses about rival gangs. The first 2 verses are very good because they are more personal. The chorus is also good. It's a long song so I would skip to the verse that starts with "The color of a person's skin"


 

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